Thursday 26 August 2021

Mr Sharp Teeth

 


                                                                                      
                                                                    

                                       Once upon a time there was a crocodile and his name was Mr Sharp Teeth.

He lived in Australia with his mates in a swamp.

He was a ballerina and he had a pretty tutu and pretty shoes he was a great dancer.

       When he was in the swamp one of his friends sharp claws got stuck on his tutu so it RIPPED the tutu.
Mr Sharp Teeth was feeling SAD< ANGRY and DISAPPOINTED!!!
Luckily for Mr Sharp Teeth, his friend was a sewer and offered to sew up the rip.



2 comments:

  1. I love this 'Six Sentence' story. It's amazing how you can write a whole story using so few words. Thank you for making me laugh.

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  2. I loved this story Millie. It was fun listening to you come up with a problem and how it was going to be solved. I really like how you have used exclamation marks which really puts emphasis on how sad, angry and disappointed Mr Sharp Teeth was feeling.

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