Once upon a time there was a crocodile and his name was Mr Sharp Teeth.
He lived in Australia with his mates in a swamp.
He was a ballerina and he had a pretty tutu and pretty shoes he was a great dancer.
Once upon a time there was a crocodile and his name was Mr Sharp Teeth.
He lived in Australia with his mates in a swamp.
He was a ballerina and he had a pretty tutu and pretty shoes he was a great dancer.
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I love this 'Six Sentence' story. It's amazing how you can write a whole story using so few words. Thank you for making me laugh.
ReplyDeleteI loved this story Millie. It was fun listening to you come up with a problem and how it was going to be solved. I really like how you have used exclamation marks which really puts emphasis on how sad, angry and disappointed Mr Sharp Teeth was feeling.
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